Under the Dome
Episode 1: Pilot
By: Carlos Uribe
Under
the Dome is a series about a small town that is trapped under a
literal dome. I will be covering this show weekly.
Spoilers
Ahoy!
It is very rare for a broadcast network to try to actually launch a
scripted show in the middle of the summer. They might premiere new
shows but they tend to have minimal marketing as the network doesn't
actually believe in the show or it's a cheap import. What I'm talking
about is a full-fledged marketing campaign and actual attempt to
compete with cable for high ratings. The networks have been slowly
moving towards more scripted summer programming so it makes sense
that one of them would finally try to truly launch one. It makes
perfect sense that it's the most successful one, the one with the
most money, the Tiffany network. It makes sense that it's going to be
an “event” kind of series, where something impossible happens to
a group of people. While some science fiction shows can only attain
cult status, an “event” series is supposed to get Lost level
ratings and penetrate the mainstream. It's the big science fiction
shows that get a lot of support from the network and whose premise
can easily be explained in one sentence. Lost: A group of people get
stranded on an island and weird shit starts to happen. Heroes: People
mutate to get special abilities. FlashForward: People see themselves
in the future. The Event: Something big is going to happen. These
“event” series are marketed as something you can't miss every
week because there's new information always being revealed. It's
meant to encourage consistent viewing by being appointment
television. It's more than that: it's meant to become something
people obsess about online so that it builds hype and so it can make
money from merchandising. These are big shows and viewers love to
check them. It's hard to make them stick around because you need a
smart plot, good characters, and strong relationships to ground the
series. It makes sense that Under the Dome is not only an “event”
series but also one that's based on a Stephen King book. It means it
has a built-in fanbase to help build up the word of mouth and that
will tune in to the show. The ratings for this episode of Under the
Dome were solid-if it keeps them up then this will be a legitimate
hit. The question is does Under the Dome deserve to be a hit or to be
remembered as yet another flop in the “event” sub-genre?
A large problem with Under the Dome is that it doesn't feel like a
pilot. It feels like an episode that airs in the middle of the
season. This is an odd criticism and I'm sure some people will wonder
why that's a bad thing. A pilot is meant to start things up. We're
dropping into this show's universe, meeting the characters, and the
pilot is setting up plotlines. It can often feel very
exposition-heavy for this reason but it's needed so that the viewer
can know what's going on and the series can launch the narrative as
efficiently as possible. What this episode feels like is that those
narratives were underway half-way through the season already. This
leaves very little time or room for them to actually be introduced.
It feels rushed and it's hard to care about them for this reason. It
comes at the cost of character development because we don't get to
know these characters before they start acting. It came at the cost
of setting up the show's universe because we didn't spend as much
time with the dome as I would have liked. It felt, at times, more
like a background obstacle rather than the most important thing in
the town right now. At other times, it was the most important thing.
Under the Dome ultimately felt rushed. It was too busy as it had to
juggle a lot of things and thus it didn't do a single thing right.
The premise of Under the Dome was cool and I was looking forward to
this show. I left not really caring a lot about any of the characters
or their plots. It didn't hook me because I was too busy trying to
orient myself to the show's universe. It would have been a lot more
beneficial if the pilot had slowed down and taken it's time.
It always red flags on me when I don't really feel like I know who
any of the characters are after watching the pilot. I don't mean that
their undeveloped but there are some I don't even know who their
archetype is supposed to be. The main male “protagonist” of Under
the Dome appears to be Barbie. He's a veteran who appears to work as
a debt collector for the mafia or something. I'm not entirely sure.
He begins the episode disposing of the body before being trapped
inside the dome of the small town. He largely spends the rest of the
episode reacting to it as he tries to figure out what it is and help
the people he comes across. He doesn't have much of a personality
which is odd because the pilot is trying to give him some edge. He's
stuck living with the main female protagonist, female reporter Julia
Shumway whose husband he just killed at the beginning of the episode.
Julia is largely a non-entity. Her whole personality is boiled down
to her job. When she finds out that her husband hasn't been working
every Sunday like she believed, her reaction in a later scene is that
she's a reporter who doesn't even know what's going on with her
husband. This is a fine line but it basically reveals how that's the
only part of her character that was established. I'm guessing the
antagonist is Big Jim, the local politician who is left in control of
the town. He's written pretty much exactly as you would expect. None
of them really made a big impression. Julia is defined by her job,
Big Jim is a stereotype, and I'm not sure what Barbie is supposed to
be. We follow him a lot and he does a lot what a protagonist is
supposed to do but we get a lot of hints that he's not. I don't mind
deeply flawed characters but that would require Barbie to be one.
Right now, he feels more like a plot device with secrets than
anything else. The role he should play is the new guy in town that
allows the writers to introduce us to the characters but they don't
do this.
The pilot has a slew of other characters. The sheriff is Duke
Perkins, who acts about as typically as possible except when the
conversation turns to the oil. He's become corrupted which should
mean something except there's nobody to really be corrupted. His
deputy, Linda, is new to the job and played by Natalie Martinez but
the only thing we know about her is that she's a cop. The town's DJ
is Phil but once again all we know is what his job is. We know he
likes classical rock but we don't know much about him. His engineer,
Dodee, is similarly undeveloped. The show has two lesbians and a
daughter arrive at the town and there are signs of personality there.
Norrie is the typical rebellious teenager who needs to be sent to a
tough love camp. Carolyn and Alice blended in a bit together but one
of them was more of a worry-wart than the other. The show also
employs young characters. There is a young teenager, Joe, who
likewise has no personality but his parents are on the other side of
the dome. Angie wants to leave the town but that's basically all
there is to her character. She gets captured by the boyfriend she
breaks up with at the beginning of the episode, Junior. He's a creep
who doesn't know how to get over girls. He's not very well defined
but he's actually the most fleshed out character this show has. Under
the Dome had too many plots, it had too many characters, and it had a
premise to establish that the pilot sort of fell under it's own
weight. The only way this pilot could have worked is if was able to
spend it's time. Cut down on the plot to establish each character. If
possible, make it two hours so that every character could be
introduced and developed. As it stands, Under the Dome is beginning
as a mess which means it's going to be difficult for future episodes
to fix especially due to it's serialized nature.
Under the Dome begins on very shaky ground. It has a high concept
premise but it's drowned out by everything that the pilot has to
establish. There are multiple plot threads running that make it
confusing to get oriented in the show. There are too many characters
that not a single one of them is really all that established. The
series is trying to set up complex situations and characters but
fails because it can't spend enough time with any of them. It's a
huge disappointment for such a hyped series. Can it get better?
Sure-but that would mean having to learn patience and not cramming so
many things into 45 minutes. It's doubtful that the creators will
learn this lesson in time to fully correct the ship. Even so-I'm
intrigued by the premise and I'm hoping that it will be able to pull
itself together for that reason. Just make no mistake: Under the
Dome has a very weak start. The characters aren't there, the premise
is too much in the background, and the plots are overwhelming. It
should have started simple but it instantly went to complex. And in
doing so, the pilot wasn't able to establish any depth to it's
complexity.
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