The Following
Episode 3: The Poet's
Fire
By: Carlos Uribe
The
Following is a show about an FBI Agent who must track down and find a
cult of serial killers.
Spoilers Ahoy!
So
this is going to be that kind
of show. There are certain television series out there that deal with
spies. The idea behind those shows is that anybody could be a spy so
you have to watch out. This can lead to effective plot twists where a
civilian is revealed to have been a spy. There are spy dramas that
can pull this off because they know it's best used sparingly but
there are others where they confused “anybody can be a spy” with
“everybody is a spy”. There is a huge difference between the two.
The latter Jacob use the plot twist that a civilian is a spy so much
that it should just be assumed by the viewer that anybody who has a
line is somehow involved. It's ridiculous but it's also particularly
weak writing. The former show is the one that's able to show
restraint but in doing so creates a more realistic world where the
plot twist not only works but the tension that anybody can be a spy
actually works. So why bring this up? After all, The Following is a
show about a cult of serial killers and it has nothing to do with
spies. The problem with the Following is that it's starting to become
increasingly apparent that the writers have confused “anybody could
be in this cult” with “everybody is in this cult”. It's
simplification but there's basically four types of characters on this
show: the cops, the serial killers, the victims, and Claire. It's
starting to become increasingly obvious that if somebody is
introduced then they're going to turn out be involved somehow. That's
not strong writing as it makes this show predictable. It's not just
predictable but it's weak writing in that it weakens the tension.
We're not going to be wondering if a person is a serial killer but
rather when the characters are going to figure it out. This is a
dangerous path for the Following to follow but it makes sense. For a
show that values shock over quality, it makes sense that it wouldn't
want to set up even a semblance of a real world. That would involve
too much work into scenes where people aren't getting stabbed. If you
need any proof, just look at Maggie.
Who
is Maggie? The previous episode had ended with the guy in the Poe
mask setting a person on fire. This episode goes a little deeper into
this action as it reveals that the victim was a critic who didn't
write a positive review for Carroll's book. Carroll single-handedly
seems to blame this critic for the book's poor reception. The police
are able to figure out that he's Rick. Rick is a character who has
always been more comfortable with fire than with stabbing people. His
wife is Maggie. She claims to have been separated from him because he
kept trying to kill her. There was a time where he had even stabbed
her. This led to a police report that seems to validate that theory.
So it looks like Maggie is an innocent bystander, right? Wrong! She
is a serial killer as well because then the show wouldn't have it's
twist. The stabbing didn't come from a domestic abuse, as the
flashback led people to believe, but because it was Rick practicing.
He had accidentally stabbed her a little too deeply so she had to go
to the hospital. Now you'd think that this hospital visit would have
led to at least Rick getting his fingerprints in the system but you
would think wrong. The FBI aren't able to identify Rick's or Maggie's
fingerprints at the beginning of the episode at the safe house they
were in. It's a twist that caught me off-guard and it made for a cool
moment but it's not a good one in the long-term. This is because I
now have the impression that everybody I'm going to meet is either
going to have a badge, die, or being a serial killer. That's not a
good impression to have simply because it makes the Following too
predictable.
The
investigation does get them closer to finding out where Joey is
because they're able to figure out that Ryan used his credit cards to
purchase toys. The same toys that Claire is able to identify as being
Joey's favorites. The suggestion is that if they're able to find Rick
then they'll be able to get the location. This is confirmed by Jordy.
Parker is able to trick a question out of him by telling him a lie.
Jordy reveals that Maggie (hence the twist) was the one who planned
the abduction with Emma. When Jordy realizes he had betrayed Joe
based on a lie, he kills himself. It's slow-going but it doesn't seem
like the series is in any actual rush to rescue the little kid. This
does lead into the episode's cliff-hanger where Claire and Ryan get
an e-mail where they are training the little kid into being a serial
killer when they force him to kill animals. I'm not sure their plan
is actually going to work. Do serial killers like to kill animals
when they're kids? Yes-but not because they're being told to by
adults but because they have a desire to kill. On the other hand,
kids are extremely impressionable at that age so who knows? Maybe
they have a chance of him becoming one of them.
Which
me brings me to discuss a large part of the episode where the show
seems insistent on delivering a love triangle between three serial
killers. In the middle is Jacob. Jacob's in love with Emma but he's
had a long relationship with Paul. It's been sort-of obvious that
something happened between the two guys. They might have been
pretending to be gay for a couple of years but there came a point
where they became bisexuals when the two actually consummated their
fake relationship. I guess this is supposed to be edgy for being a
bisexual love triangle AND a serial killer love triangle at the same
time but it mostly feels like it's added to make the plot at the
house interesting. It isn't succeeding as it's more ridiculous than
anything else. I personally would be more interested to see their
attempts to turn little Joey from a normal human being into one of
them. It could be a way for the show to make a comment on nature vs.
nurture in a way that had stakes for the character: his soul. Alas,
the show decides to portray their conflict amongst each other. Oh,
and Paul's decision to kidnap Megan so he can stop being a third
wheel makes no logical sense in any form and feels like it was added
on to make things more complicated rather than an actual character
move. Heck, at this stage I wouldn't be surprised if Megan decides to
join them. That would be surprising despite making no sense with
characters-right up this show's alley!
The
Poet's Fire is an episode that has a lot of plot but I'm finding my
interest in it quickly slipping. The quality for the show dipped
significantly this episode and I find myself actually bored through
the love triangle scenes. There are moments that were good but there
was simply too many mediocre or outright bad parts that overshadowed
these signs of hope. The show is going to need to step up it's
development of characters and make sure not to overplay the “this
person is a serial killer” twist if it wants me to remain onboard.
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