The Following
Episode 2: Chapter Two
By: Carlos Uribe
The
Following is a show about an FBI Agent who must track down and find a
cult of serial killers.
Spoilers Ahoy!
I
think a huge problem with the show could be summed up with that final
scene. A scene where the man in the Edgar Allen Poe mask set a random
person on fire. It's supposed to be a cool scene that provides
incentive to watch the next episode immediately. There should be no
problem with this, right? It's just that the scene right before it
was pretty much the perfect one to end the episode on. It would have
provided the show with a great ending based on character rather than
plot. Ryan Hardy intensely watching Claire sleep was not only a great
character keep but it got me more excited to see where the show could
potentially go. An excitement that was ironically hurt by that
cliff-hanger. Why? It might have been a cool scene but it didn't have
any meaning. It just happened. The scene before it was at least based
on an action that meant something to the characters but the show
chose to end on a cool but senseless action. The cliff-hanger of the
previous episode had worked because the kidnapping of the kid carried
stakes and direct consequences to the main characters. It had more
meaning and it fit more naturally into the episode than the ending of
this episode. It sort-of feels like it was added on with no
consideration to what had happened before. This is a show that is so
plot-heavy that it often comes at expense of character.
The
good news is that this show has at least started to rectify that
problem of character. There are numerous scenes that attempt to
develop the relationship between Claire and Ryan. One of the best
flashbacks is when they talk about their first kiss. It's a scene
that manages to work because it feels real. The characters are
allowed to have an actual human connection. This is so important to
note because it's the first time where the characters feel like
they're actual human beings rather than constructs in the writer's
imagination. The flashback might have been brief but it did more to
show the connection that the two had than anything before it.
Everything else has been so carefully constructed that it was a nice
relief to see a scene where it seemed like the characters were
comfortable with each other. The show has also started to develop Joe
Carroll's followers through their own flashbacks. It's nice that the
show was willing to slow down the pace just enough in order to start
telling us who these people are rather than just going through the
plot. It's nowhere to the level that it needs to be in order for the
drama to really take hold because most of the characters remain
two-dimensional. The police characters largely exist for exposition
and even Claire still remains relatively two-dimensional. It's steps
in the right direction but it's a long journey.
The
actual plot was somewhat successful in creating tension. The problem
is that very little of consequence actually happened. There were cool
violent moments that were supposed to catch the viewer offguard but
they happened to characters we barely knew or didn't even meet. The
tension of the main plot was hurt simply because of two reasons. The
first is that it becomes evident early in the episode that Joey is
going to remain kidnapped until at least the next episode. That his
disappearance sort-falls into the wayside at moments of the episode
only add to that feeling. It's difficult to keep the tension alive
for something that becomes quite obvious that the it's going to take
a while to resolve. Making matters more difficult is that the kid
isn't in any imminent danger. There is a hint that one of the fake
gay couples (the one not dating the babysitter) might snap the kid's
neck but that's just it: a hint. It's difficult to keep the desire to
see Joey rescued be kept alive when he gets to live in a nice house
without any fear. He doesn't even realize he's been kidnapped. The
second reason the tension is undermined is because the show decides
to put Claire's life in danger.
There
is a good reason to put her in danger because Joe is hoping to
rehabilitate Ryan's reputation by having him rescue her. This would
be no problem if the show didn't try to play that she might actually
be in danger. The show tries it's best but I was never convinced she
was actually going to die. There's a difference between killing a
main character in the pilot and doing the same in the next episode.
It might have made sense when it comes to the plot but the show
should have realized that viewers would have been ahead of it. The
pilot had at least introduced the idea that everybody might die but
this idea will be undermined if the show abuses it to put the
characters in false mortal danger. This whole plot also served to
distract from the investigation into the kid's kidnapping which
played into undermining the tension in two different ways.
Chapter
Two is an episode that isn't completely bad but it still suffers a
lot of problems from the pilot. It's at least taking the right steps
when it comes to characters but it has yet to find it's theme or
message. The violence remains like it's added on because it's cool
rather than to actually contribute to the plot. I'm still a bit
hooked but the show is now in danger of losing my interest. Here's
hoping the third episode is able to be big enough of an improvement
to make me want to find out what happens next immediately.
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