Suburgatory
Episode 11: Yakult
Leader
By: Carlos Uribe
Suburgatory is a show about a teenage girl who is stuck in her
version of hell, the suburbs.
Spoilers
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There
is a certain prevailing feeling throughout the episode that the
writers had a lot of great ideas and crammed as many as they could
into this episode. This is primarily apparent in the main plot. Tessa
is convinced by Sheila to help find a boyfriend for Lisa. The only
reason Tessa agrees is because Lisa actually prefers it but then a
lot of things happen. This is because the plot never really gets a
direction to go in so it bounces from place to place. It might be
because the only quality that Lisa looks for in a man is that he has
a torso. This is a pretty low bar to set but it makes finding the
right man more difficult. It is an unstated fact in life that more
options can actually make life more challenging simply because it can
be confusing to determine which choice will make one happy. There is
then a scene where Sheila tries to interview which boys might be
right for her daughter. It's a predictable route for the show take
but it adds it's own little twist because she lured almost of them
under false pretenses. They all think that they're applying to
provide lawn service. This serves for a good laugh but it's
completely disjointed from the rest of the episode. The episode then
has Lisa get a boyfriend on her own but it turns out to be a middle
school student. This leads to a couple of funny gags but it's once
again separated from every other element. The final part is where
Tessa sets up an online profile for Lisa only to fall in love with
the person on paper. That is until she learns that the guy is
actually Scott Strauss, her ex-boyfriend that she broke up with
because he was boring. She notes that it makes little sense how the
perfect person on paper is terrible in real life but the show
surprisingly doesn't make the connection how she's dating the worst
person on paper for her, Ryan. The normally observant Tessa doesn't
seem to realize this. The date doesn't go well and Lisa decides
she'll just have to accept being alone for now.
There
is a plot throughout the episode but it's made up of disjointed
scenes. There are a lot of episodes that could have been created from
the ideas that the episode brings up. For instance, the idea of Lisa
dating a middle school student could have been a great c-plot along
with Sheila's dating interviews. Tessa's online dating could have
made a funny main plot on it's own. It's just that all of these ideas
exist within the episode but they aren't really connected. Sure, the
middle school shows up at the date with Scott, but that's not
connecting the events. There are plot points but they're connected by
the thinnest of threads. Was the episode funny? It was but it was
hurt by the general lack of focus that the main plot had. It would
have been a better episode if Tessa had been given some direction to
go in at the beginning of the episode which could have driven the
narrative. At this points, the plot didn't really feel like it went
anywhere. The status quo remained the same and there was minimal
character development simply because the plot wasn't there to allow
any. Lisa doesn't count as growth because being single hasn't really
been shown to have been bothering her nor does it really impact the
Suburgatory universe in a significant fashion. Lisa stays single but
her decision on how it impacts her character isn't answered simply
because the stakes aren't properly set up. Once again, this is
because of how disjointed it all is. Having great ideas is one thing
but you have to allow each of them room to breath in order to work.
Imagine how funny this entire plot arc would have been if it had been
spread over several episodes? One episode could have had Lisa dating
the middle school student, another could have had Sheila's unique
method of finding her daughter dates, and another could have dealt
with the online dating situation. It could have allowed Sheila's
turmoil of being single actually work as we would have seen what it
meant to her. Having one episode where all three happen doesn't do
justice to a single one of these ideas.
In
other news, the sub-plot generates conflict between George and
Dallas. Dallas freaks out because Yakult doesn't seem to be happy
ever since her dog walker went to the Werner family. Wait, isn't this
identical to the whole Carmen story? Dallas has called in Yoni to try
and fix her dog. His general advice is to kick George out of her life
because he might be into her but primarily because he wants to stay
with her for some weeks. This is because he has a terrible credit
score. Yoni blames Yakult's distress on George's negativity but is
proven wrong when George decides to walk Yakult. George also takes
Dalia walking with him where he learns that she's thinking about
converting to judaism and is failing science. The bond between them
grows and Yakult's distress only existed because she wasn't getting
her daily walks. The sub-plot is nice in developing Dalia and
George's relationship but it simply felt a bit repetitive when it
came to Dallas and George relationship problems. Can't we have at
least one episode where the two are happy together rather than one
of them being insecure in their relationship? It's starting to get
annoying.
Yakult
Leader is a pretty disappointing episode of Suburgatory. The main
plot has too many elements to really come together while the sub-plot
has officially tired me out of George-Dallas conflict. The episode
was still funny but it could have worked a lot better if it didn't
have these two major problems. Overall, I'd say the episode was good
but it wasn't up to the standard that I have started to hold this
show in.
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